“ I believe everything published made a lot of sense.
However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I mean, I don't want to tell you how
to run your blog, but what if you added a headline
that makes people want more? I mean Live at the black and white show - Pacualy Stereo is kinda plain. You ought
to peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create article titles to get
viewers interested. You might add a related video or a related pic or two to grab people interested about what
you've written. Just my opinion, it would bring your website a little livelier. ”